Comments : The Lawyer

  • 16 years ago

    by Helene

    Honey you should work a bit on the middle with the dinner.. And it would be more brutal if the girl that was killed got shot by a man he once defended and set free. Otherwise that murder is more or less meaningless. But christ, it reminds me of The Devil's lawyer, which is soo cool.. Plus I completly love the original idea and the fact that it's longer than the most poems. I gladly ret it ! Proud to say I know you Alfie <3