Oh hun this one is so sad, especially when I just finished reading your other new one. You take me in so many directions at once sometimes lol. It's both beautiful and heartbreaking 5/5

Beautifully written my friend! Don't hide your feelings. Live, laugh and love each day like it's your last. Make the most of life, don't let life make you. You owe it to yourself 5/5

Damn babe you just tore my heart out with this one! I felt your pain through your words and just want to hug you now! Happy or sad, you sure know how to express yourself beautifully! Love Erika

Incredible love your work keep it up your on a role

Wow intense poem
I loved the ending as well.
Hope ur feeling well.

xx

Wow this poem was beautiful...i honestly don't have anything bad to say about this poem...you did an amazing job....it's nothing i've read before...you worded everything beautifully...and im sure a lot of people can relate to it including myself...this ones definetly going in my favs...5/5!!!!

My favourite parts of your poem:

"Tomorrow's promises remained in yesterday
Faded words she once meant yet not enough to stay
Affectionate gestures soon turned on to another
Treasured times with her I never will recover"

"A misplaced fondness...a misplaced trust
Days of happiness now turned to dust"

"She's locked up in my head...some unattainable dream
Running deep into my soul on a sentimental stream"

"She's crushed my confidence and left me sad
The emptiness inside...it hurts so bad
I try to forget about her...to say goodbye
But she's one of those memories that just won't die"

Basically the whole poem lol....as you could see im in love with the poem:)

Beautifully written,.
you just explained my emotions.
im going through that.

Been to dozens of other places and seen hundreds of crappy poems, and this was NOT a crappy one. you described it quite well and you gave it complexity - 5/5

This deserves 100/5.
heheh i love the flow of it!
its a beatiful poem and well written.

That is honestly one of the best poems i have read on this site GREAT job
-AJ

This one made me cry! Your choice of words was awesome and it flowed beautifully! Definitely deserves 5/5

Loved it loved it loved it.....filled with your pain, anger and sadness....great poem

WOW ... you're a great poet ... one of my favorites... keep writing... 5/5

I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!

This is amazing!! greatt job [:
5/5<3*

I really liked this =)