Comments : Faded Words

  • 9 years ago

    by Jackie

    Oh hun this one is so sad, especially when I just finished reading your other new one. You take me in so many directions at once sometimes lol. It's both beautiful and heartbreaking 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Diana

    Beautifully written my friend! Don't hide your feelings. Live, laugh and love each day like it's your last. Make the most of life, don't let life make you. You owe it to yourself 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Erika

    Damn babe you just tore my heart out with this one! I felt your pain through your words and just want to hug you now! Happy or sad, you sure know how to express yourself beautifully! Love Erika

  • Incredible love your work keep it up your on a role

  • 9 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Wow intense poem
    I loved the ending as well.
    Hope ur feeling well.

    xx

  • 9 years ago

    by ♥shyann♥

    Wow this poem was beautiful...i honestly don't have anything bad to say about this poem...you did an amazing job....it's nothing i've read before...you worded everything beautifully...and im sure a lot of people can relate to it including myself...this ones definetly going in my favs...5/5!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by ♥shyann♥

    My favourite parts of your poem:

    "Tomorrow's promises remained in yesterday
    Faded words she once meant yet not enough to stay
    Affectionate gestures soon turned on to another
    Treasured times with her I never will recover"

    "A misplaced fondness...a misplaced trust
    Days of happiness now turned to dust"

    "She's locked up in my head...some unattainable dream
    Running deep into my soul on a sentimental stream"

    "She's crushed my confidence and left me sad
    The emptiness inside...it hurts so bad
    I try to forget about her...to say goodbye
    But she's one of those memories that just won't die"

    Basically the whole poem lol....as you could see im in love with the poem:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Stephen

    Beautifully written,.
    you just explained my emotions.
    im going through that.

  • 9 years ago

    by The Monster you Trust

    Been to dozens of other places and seen hundreds of crappy poems, and this was NOT a crappy one. you described it quite well and you gave it complexity - 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by c 0 n f u s e d

    This deserves 100/5.
    heheh i love the flow of it!
    its a beatiful poem and well written.

  • 9 years ago

    by AJ

    That is honestly one of the best poems i have read on this site GREAT job
    -AJ

  • 9 years ago

    by Jaymee

    This one made me cry! Your choice of words was awesome and it flowed beautifully! Definitely deserves 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Loved it loved it loved it.....filled with your pain, anger and sadness....great poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah

    WOW ... you're a great poet ... one of my favorites... keep writing... 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by SilentlyDyingInside

    I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sexual hysterias

    This is amazing!! greatt job [:
    5/5<3*

  • 9 years ago

    by Nikki

    I really liked this =)