This is such a piece of art it as help me start to heal from my loss also for I know now she is also here with me also thanks for this lovely poem and for sharing it with us all.

Tammi,

"And when you awake i am sitting right there
You can't feel my hand, but I'm stroking your hair."
This is a really nice and comforting poem, I especially love this line.

A very touching write...it moved me deeply. I especially liked this part

"I watch over you at night stay with you whilst you sleep
See you fall in to your dreams, you get lost so deep.
And when you awake i am sitting right there
You can't feel my hand, but I'm stroking your hair."

Your emotions came through clearly in this one...beautifully done! 5/5

Wow, this one so beautiful and touching too.

"So please try to raise a smile and wipe away your tears
Wherever you are in life you know i will always be near. "

yes, please try to raise a smile you don't want to hurt him do you? :)

It's an amazing and beautiful poem .
i love it it's really made me cry it's very sad but it give us a hope. excellent work.
5/5

Hi Jodie, thats beautiful, its kind of comforting too, makes me feel my own parents may be with me now, well done x Paul

That honestly made me cry,
that was so moving and beautiful,
absalutly stunning, i love it, love it, love it.
One of your very best, keep the awsome
poems coming, you really have so much
talent to share. Defanitly a 5/5.

-mandy <3

This poem is not only one of the one's I've given a 5/5 rating too, but I've added it to my favorites as well. Losing my best friend to a motorcycle accident, really causes this poem to hit home hard for me and I actually cried reading it. You have an amazing gift, and I really hope that you continue to use it. Feel free to check out my less wonderful poetry, but I would love some input from the great writers. Keep writing and good luck with everything in your life.

Take care,
Crystal

Ah wat truly beautiful poem i sense the pain of loosing someone but i also see the meaning of healing and mending wounds and sorrow such insight is amazing i love this poem such true meaning! you are so talented! xxxxxxxxxxx 5/5 <33

This is a real image of someone mourning,
this was...wow
and very uplifting
i did enjoy reading it
very well written :]