Rockstar

by Beautiful Chaos   Mar 3, 2008


Liquid screams
And cocaine dreams
Dripping down the road

A slippery slope
So hard to cope
They try to bear the load

Cameras flashing
Cars are crashing
Brilliant burning stars

Always falling
Time recalling
Picking at the scars

Money madness
Lonely sadness
False friends dig your sound

When music's gone
And life moves on
Will they still be around

Rockstar dreams
The poet screams
Released into the night

Singe the stage
Such praise and rage
Dive into delight

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  • 15 years ago

    by ben thompson

    That poem really embodied the life of many rockstars in so few words. awesome flow, i like this write a lot. 5/5 all the best ben thompson

  • 15 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    While I kind of agree with Kevin in the respect that the topic is overdone, I completly disagree with him in the respect that the three lines he wrote in twenty seconds held more depth than this piece did. I loved this piece. These two stanzas were my favorite:
    "Rockstar dreams
    The poet screams
    Released into the night
    Singe the stage
    Such praise and rage
    Dive into delight "
    This is going in my favorites. Oh, and congradulations on the win. Beautiful poem. Flow was wonderful. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh nice, a very well topic. The flow was perfect, and the rhyming was wonderful.
    ^^^
    Great job! [5.5]

    Best wishes,

    Sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats very good xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    Very Simple but it's great!!

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