I just loved this because I could relate with every word you wrote! You described the emotions of a friend moving away flawlessly and you expressed your friendship wonderfully. The flow was great and nothing seemed forced. Overall a great read .. well done *5/5*
Aww this was very sweet! You made it very clear that this person means a lot to you. I like how you used the word "cheesy". I thought that was cute. Although these feelings can never be over-said!
The flow was smack dab great! I didn't find it rocky in any spots, which was very refreshing!
Wow this is a beautiful and an amazing friendship poem and i can relate to it 100% .. i went away to college hours away from home and its hard when you dont have any of your real friends by your side.. the ones that really know you.. i know exactly how it feels and you wrote the perfect poem to describe it.. amazing job.. i loved this poem.. 5/5 from me! keep it up =)