Comments : Don't Forget to Remember Me

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is amazing, such a touching poem!!!
    Hope all is well!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Blissful

    I just loved this because I could relate with every word you wrote! You described the emotions of a friend moving away flawlessly and you expressed your friendship wonderfully. The flow was great and nothing seemed forced. Overall a great read .. well done *5/5*

  • 9 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Aww this was very sweet! You made it very clear that this person means a lot to you. I like how you used the word "cheesy". I thought that was cute. Although these feelings can never be over-said!
    The flow was smack dab great! I didn't find it rocky in any spots, which was very refreshing!
    =)
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Nicole

    WOW! I AM SPEECHLESS!

  • 9 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow this is a beautiful and an amazing friendship poem and i can relate to it 100% .. i went away to college hours away from home and its hard when you dont have any of your real friends by your side.. the ones that really know you.. i know exactly how it feels and you wrote the perfect poem to describe it.. amazing job.. i loved this poem.. 5/5 from me! keep it up =)

    i really loved the ending too.

  • 9 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Oh yea and i just wanted to add..

    With you, my bright shining starlets,
    Who have always stuck by my side,
    You know me better than I know myself
    And I feel like part of me has died.

    my favorite stanza.. written perfectly. That is exactly how i feel.

  • 9 years ago

    by oNice

    I'll never forget to remember you,
    Just don't forget to remember me.

    I love those lines!! Great job! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    ...I'll never forget to remember you,
    Just don't forget to remember me. ...

    it made me miss my friends even more.... very touching and very well written..
    good work..

  • 9 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    I can really relate to that right now.
    Well done.

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Kitten

    This really touched me
    i can relate really well
    wonderful poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    I would be soooo happy to have a friend like you.....This poem is beautiful....true friends never forget and will always be there. x x x

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I really liek that, its good xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Shantel

    I sent this poem to my friends back home. its so beautiful but they forgot me anyways