This is more a poetic write than a poem. But its very beautifully written. It flows nicely with a lot of emotion... Goo write! :)

Or while your hold me.
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I don't know if that is supposed to be -you- or -holding- just a tip.

I liked this one. It sums up a lot of what people do for their loved ones. The flow seemed alright, i don't know about the same ending for every sentence, maybe switch it up once in awhile. Other than that is was good.

oOx
Chanelle

I love the way you dont have to rhyme and the way it seems u r simply writing a letter-
raindrops 5/5

OMG!!! This is so sweet and I love how he just reaffirms that his love for you is true and that he doesn't mind going th e extra mile for you. I also dig how you let him know that it doesn't take muich, just his sweet hugs and kisses to you mean so much. This is a precious poem, just make sure he feels the same level of love and intesity from you as well.

All that you wrote is true...the person you love doesnt need so many "material" things to show you they love you. Because with the simplest thing they do for you, that tells you everything...you're a very good writer, and i like the way you write your poems...This one will be one of my favorites!

Ill have to rember this =P
its good. unique. it was nice
keep it up =]

I would have enjoyed this more if it was in stanza form because it would have a great flow. I liked the title though :]