This poem was very well-written! The flow was amazing, the word choice was excellent, and the concept was intriguing... Great write! 5/5

I love this so emotional it's excellent

:O amazing. :] the flow was flawless and you had nice descriptions. Your emotions were expressed very nicely and the piece was perfectly written. :] 5/5.

This is totally amazing!!! You have written it so well. I was carried away. Keep on writing...you are talented!!! God bless you!!!

-Pin Butterfly-