Comments : So Much More

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Awww this is so adorabley sweet and romantic.

    Love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    wow that such a sweet and romantic poem, I think that the girl you wrote it for is going to be really happy with it;)
    The rhyming was done great, almost every line rhymed and it doesn't sounds forced. The poem flows nicely so I must say that this poem is going into my favorites.
    keep it up;) 5/5
    kisses Stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    DAVID AND KRISTY FOREVERRRR.

    :p

    Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved this poem. It was kinda long but it held my attention. It had a nice flow and wounderful word choice. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    This was so perfectly written.

    I really liked it.

    It had a really good flow.

    5/5

    Take care.

  • 15 years ago

    by MissMeg

    O i love this poem. it is so romantic and sweet. good job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    WOW. great poem. perfect flow. i liked it alot 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    Yes agree with the others, you had great flow, and it was very sweet!

  • 15 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Aww. Adorable poem. :]
    Keep writing! I haven't seen a new one from you in foreverrr.
    Since, I'm back..[Temps] I'll be awaiting another piece from you!

  • 15 years ago

    by Kait

    Wonderful. absolutely beautiful. very well written :) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Unknown

    Wow! gr8 poem!!
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Markuz

    This is one of the best poems i have read,
    I wish i could of felt the words you just expressed.
    It would have been something.
    Anyway it was great ;D
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Steven Topaz

    Its a good think that you found someone that cares as much about you as you do them. that seems rare now adays. I can relate to half of it, The giving care part. and the day you write a poem isnt good Apocolypse?

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    This was beautiful. What an adorable love poem! It was filled with sincerity and it really worked well poetically.
    I really enjoyed the read. Love poems are often very cliche, but this wasnt, it had your own little style in there :]
    Really well done.
    5/5