Comments : Numb Pain

  • 16 years ago

    by FallingAngel

    It's a great poem but it would probably help if you put more spaces in it. It felt cramped. Other than that it was amazingly powerfull.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This was very good. Very well written. I like to call these "Poetic writes" more than a poem. This kinda has a story to it and it doesn't have a structure for a normal poem. But this is great work, keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow....This was so sad...but it had a certain beauty to it as well in it's sadness. I'm so sorry. This poem had so much strength in it, and feeling. It was amazing. I'm adding it to my favorites. 5/5
    ~gabriella

  • Breathtaking. It left me speechless. The pain, the amount of sadness went right into me and down my spine. Brilliant. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris Creedux

    Very well done my friend ... very well done.
    As touching and as sad as the poems is ... I can honestly say I've been there before.

    Awesome work keep it up !

  • 16 years ago

    by HillaryNicole

    Omg i dont care wat anybodi says dat was GREAT. N usually i dont like stuff dat doesnt ryhme but dis HAS 2 b an exception

  • 16 years ago

    by bra it knee

    This was really deep.
    i felt as if i was almost there.
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra

    Wow. This was very good. I really like it. You did an excellent job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Quintarae

    I really like this poem wat inspired you to right it?

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    That was a great poem i felt all da emotion in it!
    xo