Perfect Day

by Lemma   Mar 9, 2008


Shining sun and singing birds?
This version is often heard.
So many people think a perfect day,
Should be set in just this way.

My point of view is somewhat unique,
It's not blue skies and fluffy clouds I seek.
But pouring, driving, endless rain,
Hammering on the window pane.

As you and I are safe inside,
And from the entire world we hide.
So we can spend it just together
And wish one day will last forever.

Tender kisses and lingering words,
Between a couple of love-struck nerds.
Cute little smiles and innocent glances,
Inside jokes and private dances.

Nothing distasteful, nothing unclean,
My perfect day involves nothing obscene.
Frozen in time, just you and I,
When you tell me you love me and look into my eyes.

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  • 9 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Beautiful poem. "Tender kisses and lingering words, Between a couple of love-struck nerds." -- That parts my fave. Soo cute. Keep up the good work.

  • 9 years ago

    by David Ensor

    Wow, i really like this one too. I like your perspective on life. cant wait to read another.

  • 9 years ago

    by firexdancer

    I can't stop smiling right now. Your poems are just so sincere and sweet! I just want to go: AWWWW! This really made me happy, many people don't really write in this beautiful, honest way you do, and I just love this.

    "Tender kisses and lingering words,
    Between a couple of love-struck nerds.
    Cute little smiles and innocent glances,
    Inside jokes and private dances."

    ^I thought this part of the poem was one of the cutest, but I loved the entire thing.
    5/5
    ~gabriella