Comments : Fate

  • 11 years ago

    by Lyssa

    Wow...

    This I love, its so true..
    Even today I was walking through the mall and just seeing all those couples made me so mad and sad...
    I tried to not show it but its hard not to...

    great poem :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is truly amazing. You expressed the deepest feelings in the poem. Very well write. I could relate so much, just close. Keep writing! 5/5