Oh my gosh I'm speechless lol. This one really hit me hard, made me think of the past and how lonely I truly am. Where does all of this come from, and how are you still single? Another beautiful poem from a beautiful heart! 5/5
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It made me feel so at ease with everything because your words and everything were just so smooth and they just blended so well together. I have never seen a guy write such great poetry. Your a very deep person and i hope to read more from you soon.
I loved that, how it was so sweet and loving at the beginning and then near the end, in the last stanza it showed loves flaws: how hard it is to say goodbye. My favorite part was the last though:
The tear down your cheek when we say our goodbyes
From the lump in my throat and the sting in my eyes
When days feel like seconds...and a second a day
So it's only a feeling...but it's like that...love's way
It made me so sad, it was just so desciptive and the rhyme sceme was absolutley perfect, great job. it made me think of the fact that I'm going to have to say goodbye to "him" soon. Thanks for that wonderful read, it was really beatiful, keep on writing, hoping to read more.