Just For You

by RiCarDo   Mar 10, 2008


As I sit here all alone
I think of only you
I think of how I love you
and how you make me feel
I think of what could be
a wish come true
for you to love me too

I'm holding on to my love for you
and hoping one day soon
you will love me
like I love you

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  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    I agree with everyone here: its very good but it could be better. However i disagree with waisted. I think its fresh and simple and flowery words would weigh it down. But the first part could have flowed just a little bit better. The last stanza was very good though. Good job! 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    Very sweet poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Umm i liked it but i think that you could have made this alot better than it is...we as the readers need to be able to feel your love for some one..we need to be able to imagine you telling her you love her...make it more visual and use more word choice

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