Umm i liked it but i think that you could have made this alot better than it is...we as the readers need to be able to feel your love for some one..we need to be able to imagine you telling her you love her...make it more visual and use more word choice

Very sweet poem.

I agree with everyone here: its very good but it could be better. However i disagree with waisted. I think its fresh and simple and flowery words would weigh it down. But the first part could have flowed just a little bit better. The last stanza was very good though. Good job! 4/5