This is a very deep and intense piece. I can feel the sadness crying from your words. I love the imagery.

Fast foward! She's now breaking down,
Fell off her throne, lost loves crown,
Press stop! See the girl on the screen,
That was me at the age of sixteen.

Very deep emotions.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Hey,hey , hey.....
really cool use of imagination and imagery but the best part i liked was saying everyhting in those 3 paras....GR8 wrk!!!

LOve,
AgRoN '~'