Comments : Just Some Thoughts (screw the rhyme)

  • 9 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    That was one of the best poems I've ever read. I think that if you had made it rhyme it would have been a cutesy poem and not what you were aiming for.

  • 9 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    EXTRAORDINARY!!!!
    that was utterly impressive. And a rhyme scheme would have just ruined it.. Loved every single detail there and the flow was good i thought.
    I SIMPLY LOVED IT!