WoW...hehe...nice instructions.. :p

Wow...great now im horney...haha i love that fact that u were discriptive enough i mean i got an image of it and everything

;] hmmm... this poem was well written, and same goes for me about the comment you left..looks like you know *exactly* what your doing. tehe well I thought it was a lovely write keep it up
5/5

Good job... i love how you actually broke it into steps

Well sir I sure I must take my hat off you, no sarcasm intended
I must say this really good advice not to mention a really great poem

Wow! interesting intstructions, nice way to put them..haha...wow i really had an image in my mind...pretty good tho

Whooo uh.. thats uh.. good

Dayum dis shiit is tite
kip doin wat u do
coz dis shiit is messed up
loved it to bitss boo

Wicked!
Loved it!

Brill!

Keep up the good writing!

Danielle
x

Wow, very descriptive. love it though.
thats how one should make love....
its sad when you think about it, that they only use it for fun, or, a one night stand, to say the least.or...cheat...on...people...... ech.
:D keep it up, love.

So, the title is what did it for me. Once I saw it I just HAD to read it. This was such a sweet, if not a little eccentric poem. I mean how many people write poems about how to make love? Not many. I've never "made love" so I can't really relate to this. >.> I really love how it talks about taking it slow and just enjoying the sensations, most guys just want to hurry, ya know? At least there's some guys out there that know how to do it right. Hahaha. Seriously though, it was so sweet.

Step four:
Touch her slowly, make sure shes wet,
Keep rubbing her breasts, you can't forget,
Let her know you're ready, with a kiss,
Then slowly put it in, don't miss,

^^ LMAO. That last part "don't miss" just made me burst out laughing. Thank you for making me day.

I like how you put "Step One" "Step Two" etc. It really adds to what you were trying to do, which was teach other guys to take it slooooooow, and be more passionate. You really could feel the passion and heat while reading it.

Amazingly awesome poem!

Keep writing!
Cayce

[One more poem down! Mwuhahaha!]

Wow ! this poem is really great ! loved the language that was used. and i cold picture the image right away ! keep it up (: EXCELLENT'E !

Amazing poem

Amazing poem

Cool :P

Good one!

TELL HIM. MOST OF THEM HAVE ISSUES.

Woaw boy that right there is too crazy but i like it...u used too have too many experience from it so slow down aight lol

What a wonderful poem!!
I read it twice:D...I really liked that u put it in steps and that u showed that making love should be so romantic not as a desire wzout true love..
I enjoyed reading ur poem soooooooo much..
Great job,plz keep it up5/5..

Ayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee get it........you no how to make love :) good poem