Wow, very descriptive. love it though.
thats how one should make love....
its sad when you think about it, that they only use it for fun, or, a one night stand, to say the least.or...cheat...on...people...... ech.
:D keep it up, love.
So, the title is what did it for me. Once I saw it I just HAD to read it. This was such a sweet, if not a little eccentric poem. I mean how many people write poems about how to make love? Not many. I've never "made love" so I can't really relate to this. >.> I really love how it talks about taking it slow and just enjoying the sensations, most guys just want to hurry, ya know? At least there's some guys out there that know how to do it right. Hahaha. Seriously though, it was so sweet.
Touch her slowly, make sure shes wet,
Keep rubbing her breasts, you can't forget,
Let her know you're ready, with a kiss,
Then slowly put it in, don't miss,
^^ LMAO. That last part "don't miss" just made me burst out laughing. Thank you for making me day.
I like how you put "Step One" "Step Two" etc. It really adds to what you were trying to do, which was teach other guys to take it slooooooow, and be more passionate. You really could feel the passion and heat while reading it.
What a wonderful poem!!
I read it twice:D...I really liked that u put it in steps and that u showed that making love should be so romantic not as a desire wzout true love..
I enjoyed reading ur poem soooooooo much..
Great job,plz keep it up5/5..