Missing Part [Acrostic]

I am inspired about your poem. I like the style, I am gonna try it too insh'Allah.

Waw, realy sweet
i love the simplisty and the feeling behind 5/5

Very creative, great short poem.5/5

Very nicely written acrostic. The flow was good which is usually hard to do with an acrostic poem.

However, I felt the lines could of been longer, just because it was an acrostic doesn't mean you always have to use just one word, you can use sentences.

Over all a nice short and to the point piece of poetry. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Very sweet poem!!!