Beautiful! Sad, emotional. The scene was brilliant, your wrote it so perfectly. 5/5

Emo as shit but i have to say i love it

That is really deep and very wel written
very good

*sobs*
okay..
*sniffles*
whew.. im okay now.
lol.

welllllll.
this is so sad.
it makes me think of a good friend.
but of course she's still alive.
this was so beautifully written.

.5/5.
great job&&keep it up.
much love,
mac.<3
[.just.another.silly.teenage.girl.]

Wow thats depressing i wanna cry now

kiwi

Wow i have a poem with that same name!!what a suprise!!but its not as good as youres though i loved it i give it 5/5 you should read some of my poems.:)