Comments : Open your eyes

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Wonderful poem, this line really touched me: no more we shall bleed,
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    So unbeliably true! such a powerful message stated in such beautiful words! job well done! goinf on my favs.! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~me~

  • 16 years ago

    by XLOSTxxANDxxWANDERINGX

    Wow so true that was a greta poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    Amazing absolutely loved it
    5/5
    good job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LS3Y

    Dang, that wuz a really good poem. it wuz so true. good job :-D

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow i really liked this poem it was soooo true and well done omg your so good

  • 16 years ago

    by L3AH

    Dude i really like your poems. this one was really good too.

  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    I love the truth of this. Most ppl are too politically correct these days; too scared to speak the truth. the only reason its 4/5 is cuz the style isnt my complete favorite but u made it sound incredible.

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber Smith

    That and awsome poem i believe what you said in the poem the end is near b/c i to have looked around to see whats been going on!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I once wrote a small line of words : The raised arm of man will never be a victor for it is broken in too many places. -- I think that this poem shows that to be true. I liked it and hope that we will survive the words. Peace....

  • 16 years ago

    by Katelynn

    This poem is really good and its the truth ....

  • 15 years ago

    by Britt

    Omg this is a really good poem....
    keep it up..
    i like it alot

    XOXOX
    Britt

  • I have no words for this poem

    accept

    great
    true
    flows
    ect

  • 14 years ago

    by Rodney Kirby

    I love this poem, we must shed our old skin, very quick and smart.