That was a great poem

This is a spendid poem - brilliant work!

Woow........ worth reading:)
nice.........

Awww..Cute and sweet..I could feel the love all throughout the poem...Brilliant work..

Eh, I'm not a fan of freestyle. I used to love freestyle when I was first starting out poetry and I think it's the absolute BEST type of poetry to start out on for beginers, but I think you could do wayyy better than this. I know you can, you won a contest of mine. ^_^