Comments : Safe with me x

  • 9 years ago

    by tamara

    This is such a beautiful poem i really loved reading it and wish i could write this well.
    fantastic work

  • 9 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Thats exactly how i feel about my boyf
    well done you really painted a picture with that poem
    loved it
    5/5
    xx

  • 9 years ago

    by halie

    I loved it,
    it wuz rlly peaceful,
    and relaxing
    yea u can picture the waves and the beach
    i feel tha same way bout my ex
    but
    5/5
    great poem

  • Sweet poem love it....

  • 9 years ago

    by Ares

    A great poem! really wonderful:D

  • 9 years ago

    by kate

    Really sweet, i liked this one alot, you have a great way of writing.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ixora

    Amazing hun. you make people feel alive 5/5

    *^*crow*^*

  • 9 years ago

    by LiNa

    Brings back memories for me . haha great poem

  • 9 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    Love this, 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Jeanette

    A very beautiful piece of work[[=
    5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    Cute and sweet.
    It made me smile.
    I keep wanting to read more of your work.
    Keep it up!
    :DDDD

    Megx333

  • 9 years ago

    by Gness

    Its a very comforting poem spectacular really

  • 9 years ago

    by Biya

    It speaks of great friendship between the two.I love this poem !
    5/5
    Biya

  • 9 years ago

    by Hazel

    I like this one...simple yet has this "weight" that i really admire.
    I have added this poem to my favorites.
    ...and thanks for your comment...

  • 9 years ago

    by madlyinlove

    Wow this poem is really good.....i really loved it!

  • 9 years ago

    by Wake

    Its great,
    Not too long, not too short, simple and sweet.
    the flow of feeling was smooth and truly heartfelt.
    I liked it.
    The only thing that bothers me is that .. reading it gives me a feeling that it's a poem about something a little more than friendship. im a little confused with the category of the poem.. but thats what makes me read it again n again xD
    lol.:p
    keep it up.

    ~Wake~

  • 9 years ago

    by Punk Princess

    That was a great poem , i loved it 5/5 <3

  • 9 years ago

    by Cobra

    Read the poem 3x, close your eyes and get the the picture in your head. You will see how beautiful it is.

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Cody Jo as you no

    WOWSERS that is the best poem about a relationship that i ever read!!!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by KelleyJo

    Aww! Sooo cute! Keep writing!! :)