Abstruse

"everthing I was
I dont want to be
Right here infront
Of you, is me"

give it time
ill make it through
I fell in deep
a time or two
Im giving up
ON All I knew
cos all I want
to know is you

i just reckon itll be easier to read that way

more of a flow...
cos when i was reading it i had to sorta like slow down

but WOW! yuur poems have awsom flow...
like mine are like just ugh they stop and start... but yuurs are amazing
and theyre short, to the point and AMAZING

i love yuur work.....

5/5

xxxxxx

5/5. Great job. I really like it!

Wow that poem is great. I can relate to it. good job!

Wow this poem was good. =)