Comments : Abstruse

  • 9 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Wow this poem was good. =)

  • 9 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow that poem is great. I can relate to it. good job!

  • 9 years ago

    by Twistd StoRY

    5/5. Great job. I really like it!

  • 9 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    "everthing I was
    I dont want to be
    Right here infront
    Of you, is me"

    give it time
    ill make it through
    I fell in deep
    a time or two
    Im giving up
    ON All I knew
    cos all I want
    to know is you

    i just reckon itll be easier to read that way

    more of a flow...
    cos when i was reading it i had to sorta like slow down

    but WOW! yuur poems have awsom flow...
    like mine are like just ugh they stop and start... but yuurs are amazing
    and theyre short, to the point and AMAZING

    i love yuur work.....

    5/5

    xxxxxx