Really good poem. I have a friend who just got sent to Irak and his mom can't believe it happened. But anyway, I loved every word you chose to describe it. I felt all the hate you described in this. I absolutely loved it. Good job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

Great expression and choice of words and the emotion of it. i love your work

I like the point of view this poem takes, it's different from most of the stuff I read about wars and soldiers. It's proud yet angry. Nice combination. My favourite stanza is:

"Their deaths would all be in vain
Because of your mistake
But no matter what you do
Their pride will never break."

Rhyme felt a little forced at times but otherwise this was great,

Em xXx

Really good.

Tells the story of our messed up societies views on war perfectly.

Keep up the good work!
-chris