I loved it! And thanks foe commenting on my haiku!
-oNice

Cute poem... Short and meaningful. Beautifully written. 5/5 :P

You did a wonderful job with this poem. I know a lot of people find it extremely hard to write hiakus, and if you're one of them then you do a good job with hiding it. And, if not then great job!

I wasn't sure if you were away that it doesn't have to be 5-7-5 as long as you have less or equal to 17 syllables (I believe it's 17) then you can consider it a hiaku. Of course, it must be set up with the three lines and so on. But, it's just an idea incase you weren't aware.

wonderful job. (:
Keep it up!

Very cute poem i love the night aswell - raindrops 5/5

The last line screamed Jane Austen at me. I don't know why, since I've only read 40 pages of Pride and Prejudice before giving up on it. I think it's because it sounds so innocent, dreamy and somehow, tragically sad.

Very well, so good. I love this Haiku.

5.5

I didn't like how you used wish twice in thie poem because I feel it threw the flow of the poem off for me. I could image everything you described clearly because I always sit in my balcony looking at the sparkling stars in the beautiful night sky. I feel this poem could be a little stronger because I know from your talent that you could do better but it was short sweet and to the point which is why I give it a *5/5* Well done.

Oh I love the corrections you made .. see I knew you could do better! I wish I could vote again and give you a five but you could only vote once. You are truly talented hon dont even let anyone tell you otherwise.