by oNice
I loved it! And thanks foe commenting on my haiku! |
Cute poem... Short and meaningful. Beautifully written. 5/5 :P |
by Teria
You did a wonderful job with this poem. I know a lot of people find it extremely hard to write hiakus, and if you're one of them then you do a good job with hiding it. And, if not then great job! |
Very cute poem i love the night aswell - raindrops 5/5 |
by Krathia
The last line screamed Jane Austen at me. I don't know why, since I've only read 40 pages of Pride and Prejudice before giving up on it. I think it's because it sounds so innocent, dreamy and somehow, tragically sad. |
by Sarah
Very well, so good. I love this Haiku. |
by Blissful
I didn't like how you used wish twice in thie poem because I feel it threw the flow of the poem off for me. I could image everything you described clearly because I always sit in my balcony looking at the sparkling stars in the beautiful night sky. I feel this poem could be a little stronger because I know from your talent that you could do better but it was short sweet and to the point which is why I give it a *5/5* Well done. |
by Blissful
Oh I love the corrections you made .. see I knew you could do better! I wish I could vote again and give you a five but you could only vote once. You are truly talented hon dont even let anyone tell you otherwise. |