The Moment

by Aaron Deevers   Mar 16, 2008


I stand here before you
Staring into your eyes
Amazing how they are
I watch as a twinkle appears
Knowing that it's a tear
This is a moment I have waited for
Standing here before our friends our family
Waiting for the preacher to say those final words
Waiting for us to become one
At last those magical words
As I kiss my new bride
My love
My friend
We are now husband and wife

~Hasn't happened to me, but feel anytime is a magical time~

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  • 16 years ago

    by country girl

    This is a very sweet poem, for being a guy, you sure can write very well

  • 16 years ago

    by Amorita Maharaj

    Really Sweet :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    Wow just wow that is absolutly adorable and just that you can take that perspective on a moment that hasnt happened it is so beautiful keep it goin'!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I also agree it made an impact to add the word friend. The one you want to spend your life with should be your best friend. A beautifully penned depiction of your wedding day.......Nicely done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Aaron
    For you not experiencing this yet. You have the emotion down pretty good.

    I stand here before you
    Staring into your eyes
    Amazing how they are
    I watch as a twinkle appears
    Knowing that it's a tear

    I remember crying at my wedding and they were tears of joy :)
    Nice job!
    Take Care Cindy

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