Comments : The Moment

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    My love
    My friend
    We are now husband and wife

    Aaron,
    I love how you added the word "friend"to it because it is so important to be friends as well with your wife!
    Very sweet poem, I am sure you will make a really sweet husband* winks*

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Lu

    I stand here before you
    Staring into your eyes
    Amazing how they are
    I watch as a twinkle appears
    Knowing that it's a tear
    ^^^
    Such a beautiful thing when .... a tear does not have to mean sadness ... but a beautiful thing.

    This is a moment I have waited for
    Standing here before our friends our family
    Waiting for the preacher to say those final words
    Waiting for us to become one
    ^^^
    One of the most beautiful times in a person's life ... to have their friends and family share these moments ... takes one's breath away!

    At last those magical words
    As I kiss my new bride
    My love
    My friend
    We are now husband and wife
    ^^^
    Beautiful ending .... to not only see her as a wife but most importantly as a friend ....

    Wonderful!
    Luanne

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Aaron
    For you not experiencing this yet. You have the emotion down pretty good.

    I stand here before you
    Staring into your eyes
    Amazing how they are
    I watch as a twinkle appears
    Knowing that it's a tear

    I remember crying at my wedding and they were tears of joy :)
    Nice job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I also agree it made an impact to add the word friend. The one you want to spend your life with should be your best friend. A beautifully penned depiction of your wedding day.......Nicely done!

  • 9 years ago

    by Danielle

    Wow just wow that is absolutly adorable and just that you can take that perspective on a moment that hasnt happened it is so beautiful keep it goin'!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Amorita Maharaj

    Really Sweet :)

  • 9 years ago

    by country girl

    This is a very sweet poem, for being a guy, you sure can write very well