Comments : Kill me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tabitha

    To some people this poem wouldnt make sense but 2 me it does i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya,
    suffering too much to stay alive, reluctance to plunge the blade and die.
    Well done
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by NoUr

    ..u reminded me with my self b4..my nickname was alwaaaays "kill me plz"..i wanted 2 die so much..i couldnt hurt my sef..i needed some1 to volunteer and kill me..but since no1 did..i decided 2 live life!! yeah it sucks and yeah luv hurts..but u'll hav to live eventually..so cheer up!!

  • 14 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wow. Short, but with a very intense impact. I loved the rush I felt while I read that. o.O Such pain and desperation. Great job.

    Keep writing.
    Cayce

  • 14 years ago

    by Xx Alone in my Quandary xX

    Thanks all of you..:)

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Deep write 5/5 good job

  • 13 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Very well wrote, you're cute too. 5/5

    "vampires and werewolves?
    wizards and witches?
    murderers or stalkers?
    so,that i should bleed till death embrace me in its grasp... "

    I enjoyed this poem short and sweet, but with a bite also.