His fault vs her fault

by sweet escape   Mar 16, 2008


Physically, he didn't put a gun to her head
he only made her wish she were dead.

its his fault, some people may say,
that she will never again see the light of day.
she wept each day and night.
because of him, she didn't have a chance in the fight
to save her life form the blade.
he should look at the monster he made.

others will say she chose this path
without doing the math
pros and cons she did not weigh
all she wanted was to go away.
its her fault that she is dead.
she couldn't get the idea in her head
that he didn't return her love
now she flies above.
void of heart ache, pain, and thoughts of him
she can move into the light and out of the dim.

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  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    Wow great flow! My favorite poem from you so far! I like how there's 2 views in it, but yeah i'm on the boy's side :] lol haha

    great job, keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A lovely wrtten piece with nice rhyme.
    well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Humm i liked it but it was really predictable

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