Comments : Life Wrapped Up In You

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bill
    What a sad yet beautiful poem. The love you feel really shines from your words.

    Keeping to myself all the empty years
    As they are no more, because of you
    Life washed away by empty tears
    Grateful, forever loving you

    To have this kind of love in your life is a true gift. One to treasure and hold close.
    Excellent job my friend.
    Love Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    I love this line,

    Keeping to myself all the empty years
    As they are no more, because of you

    One person can make all go away and make life worth while, even if it's short. Love it sad, but beautiful.