Comments : Because

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Because..........
    You saw beauty in me
    I learned to stand tall
    Proud of who I am
    Never again to fall

    I am sure i am not the only one who saw beauty in you...just read Luanne's poem....everybody loves you.

    Infact i am the one who feels that you have taught me precious skills of surviving this cruel world.
    Lovely poem dear...thanks a ton for everything.

    love
    Nm

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Cindy,

    Such a precious thing...the love of a dear friend. I know that in Nitin you have found the perfect soulmate and this thought comforts me to an extend you have no knowledge of.

    I love you,

    Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by June

    What a beautiful poem ,and a very sweet dedication for a special friend.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lu

    Because..........
    You believed in me
    I learned to shine
    Having faith once more
    Making life mine
    ^^^
    Love pulls us through times the hardest of times and just knowing someone believes in you begins the battle of taking our life back ....

    Because..........
    You saw beauty in me
    I learned to stand tall
    Proud of who I am
    Never again to fall
    ^^^
    When we've lost our feelings of self-worth and feel the world has sunk us to the lowest possible .... a special someone comes into our lives and only then do we realize "hey I am a wonderful person"

    Because...........
    You gave me love
    I learned to feel
    Coming out of the dark
    Seeing what was real
    ^^^
    Ahhhh love the deepest word one can say or feel. Love brightens even the darkest of days. And knowing someone cares so much about you .... brings comfort to our aching hearts

    Because............
    You gave of yourself
    I learned to care
    To give of myself
    Love always to share
    ^^^
    I love this ending stanza .... sometimes we are so afraid to let someone into our hearts .. simply because we are afraid to lose them. The we realize ... I am willing to give all of me ...even if that day shall ever come.

    Beautiful poetic gem you've penned for you dearest friend hun.
    It shows the beauty within your heart ... and it shines through-out this piece
    ~Big hugs~
    Luanne

  • 9 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Awesome challenge...thanks for hosting it....great poems from it!

    This is a beautiful tribute to the friendship you and Nitin share....well done!

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Hey... impressive write...

    Because............
    You gave of yourself
    I learned to care
    To give of myself
    Love always to share

    Loved it...so beautifully u hv described d essence of friendship...

    simply amazing..

  • 9 years ago

    by Elapsed

    "Because............
    You believed in me
    I learned to shine
    Having faith once more
    Making life mine"

    What a awesome opening stanza this was. Really enticed me to read on. This was such a heart warming read, to have a friendship such as this is something to be proud of.

  • 9 years ago

    by JEFF

    Your a great write, I am really amazed at your writing skills and wish that one day I will be able to write as good.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dennis

    Beautiful and straight from the heart as are all your poems. Yes I read far more than I comment on...but I'm working on that...honest I am :)

    I don't really know you or the person you wrote this for...but the comments of others tell me it's a very special friendship...and the poem itself is a touching tribute to that!

    Thank you so much for your comment on mine...and for congratulating me on my win. Receiving that from someone so talented as you is a true honor :)

    Dennis

  • 9 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    WOW.. ok so I'm sure you already know this poem is a success because everyone seems to love it!

    I just loveee the way you started each stanza with "because" and then gave a reason..

    It is a unique and very satisfying style - especially for a poem like this. I love the way you gave reasons of why this person is such a good friend! It really shows you are thankful and that you appreciate this friend.

    Because..........
    You believed in me
    I learned to shine
    Having faith once more
    Making life mine

    That stanza is so powerful and really filled with so much emotion! Just having a friend there for you can really change your life around and you did an amazing job expressing that!

    Because..........
    You saw beauty in me
    I learned to stand tall
    Proud of who I am
    Never again to fall

    Sometimes other people see things in us that we dont see -- positive things.. and just that can make us turn our life around. "Proud of who i am, never again to fall" -- such true inspirational words.

    It is truly a blessing to have such great friends that will always be there. and there aren't too many of them so when you have one you are very lucky.

    Beautiful poem. 5/5 - keep it up =)

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Because i see beauty in you, from inside and outside, to your friend that you always be, beautiful penned dear friend, simple yet unique style written.... every word your write, so deep mean inside... well done!

  • 9 years ago

    by Javon Washington

    I like ur poem it really touched me now can u comment mine pleze thanx

  • 9 years ago

    by Boy

    This poem is realy touching poem.. it shows the care innocence and sympthies that a friend expect to another friend. welldone.

    i love the word becasue you wrote in your poem. it makes the sense and link every stanza to one another.
    good job

  • 9 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Because.......
    you wrote what you feel
    and your feelings are true
    i want to say "a wonderful poem"
    i can feel what you feel, yes i do

  • 9 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Since I fell in love with the Easter Bunny poem I had to come back for me. I must say I love this!!!! NM must be honored to have such a wonderful piece written for them!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by xXxMzPuRpLe BaBiiExXx

    It was a different 2 me!!!
    but very good!!!
    i enjoyed readin it!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah

    A very touching poem. A very young lovely piece you penned here. Great joB!

    Because..........
    You saw beauty in me
    I learned to stand tall
    Proud of who I am
    Never again to fall

    This is a real inspiration!

    Keep writing my Dear friend [5/5]

    Best wishes

    Sarah xx