Comments : Magic

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    I enjoy reading this because of the simple sweet thought that include in every stanza.. it was too serene and gracefull that made it really nice. great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    WOW! Noha! This is amazing! Your writing skills have improved so much! I don't even really like love poems, but this was just amazing! Your word choice, and grammar were very good. The flow and rhymes were very good. Everything was just very good. Haha.

    the most commonplace
    ^^Common and place need a space between them. :]

    Great job!!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Thanks cayce , i still try sometimes it comes write and sometimes wrong but i find my self learn every time

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Beautifully written and great concept. I loved how easily I could read it... and the ending was really good! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow this is amazing! I tried to pick out my favorite stanza but I just couldn't choose one. each stanza has soooo much meaning and you have great talent to be able to write this. The flow is flawless - it just carries you right thru the poem and it is such a deep poem as well. It has so much meaning and you really described love in such a beautiful way!

    I think maybe the title for this might work better as "Life's Sweet Mystery" ... just an idea.. it works either way... and the title is no biggie.

    Once again - great job! 5/5 for sure. Beautiful poem =)

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    I loved this poem the emotion and the way u expressed it was excellent
    i loved the first stanza it was well worded and really caught my attention and made me read on
    "Love is like magic
    and it always will be,
    For love still remains
    life's sweet mystery."
    this poem was engaging and well structured the flow was alright
    well done 5/5 from me :)

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Nice poem really liked it.=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved this poem. It reminds me of me and my bf's relationship :D I think that your poem tells the truth. I love the rhyming and how easy it was to read, understand, and to relate to. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Love works in ways
    that are wondrous and strange
    And there's nothing in life
    that love cannot change!

    ^^ fav. part^^

    you writing was great, i could feel the love.
    lots of emotion and drew me in.

    i also like the one word title. it captures attention.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Aww very beautiful and cute poem indeed. i love it alot. the way you defined love with such a rhyming, you really did a great job

    one of the best i have ever read in a while

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww this was just beautiful and oh so sweet. I love being able to see this beautiful emotion through your eyes because you described everything so flawlessly. Well done my dear I truly enjoyed reading this. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    I love this poem so much, its so emotional and true, "love is magic"
    the way you started each stanza with "love is" makes the poem more interesting and its amazing how you can find so much to relate to what love is
    my favourite stanza was the last one
    "Love can't be bought,
    it is priceless and free,
    Love, like pure magic,
    is life's sweet mystery! "
    that is so true in every single way
    great job 5/5