His eyes are his voice in desguise

by Unamed   Mar 19, 2008


Those piercing eyes are staring at me,
searching.....
looking at him, it's hard to turn away.
his eyes have the strong, dreamy look,
deep inside....

A single movement can make this moment change.

With a brush of his lips to my hair,
it makes it that more special.
His hand slowly lifts to brush my hair with his hands.
His light fingertips slowly brush my bangs away,
as i look deep into his eyes.

A single movement can meke this moment change.

His eyes are his voice in desguise,
When i look deep inside, he tells me.
As he brushes my hair away with those lovely fingertips,
i can see it in his eyes that he loves me.

A single movement can make this moment change.

********aLy*********

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This was a really good poem. Although it wasn't written that great. And you mis-spelled "make" in the one line. The flow was really good and concept was absolutely beautiful! I really liked the feeling this poem gave me as I read it :)

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    With a brush of his lips to my hair,
    it makes it that more special.
    His hand slowly lifts to brush my hair with his hands.
    His light fingertips slowly brush my bangs away,
    as i look deep into his eyes.

    Wow, I really adore that stanza. Very well written, catchy and unique. I really love your wordage too. Pretty great one, keep writing!!!
    5/5 for sure!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Nice work aly , beautiful words, and great feeling, great jop , keep in your love , and keep in your write,5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Wow! that is really good...i just broke up w/ my bf so it made me cry! *sniff*
    it was so good. I totally get wut it means...
    5/5

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