Thank you for sweet comment

The title is simply sweet, as the poem consist of. Especially the first stanza. Give you 5/5 is a must!!! Nice job, keep writing...

Great poem....It was kind of sad but it was still great....it had a nice flow and i loved the word choice...5/5

I totlay love it!.great job!.i feel the same way about some1 else.....i like him and he's all sweet one day and the next he's all distant........i know what u mean!.....great job!!!!5/5
*******aLy****

When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.
^^ very good way to start the poem^^

love your way with words, it flows very well

I loved this poem alot, i can see you writting has improved. it seems love raised your level in writting hehe.

*this is for you amr i know how much you love me but sometimes i need to feel that always you do, you know my mind or my heart always fight , i love you so much and always you do but girls need to feel it more and more. *

i agree with you noha, a girl should always be loved and should always feel it but many guys don't understand this unless you force me to... lol

I could really feel the love in your heart for this person while reading this poem. The emotions were deep and your descritptions were true and full of meaning.

"You thought your love was growing true,
And then one day it was all so blue."
^Thats so true. Things change so fast sometimes and you don't know what happened. Well done *5/5*

The emotion was there and was well expressed and this poem was definitely written from the heart
i hate it the way guys lead u on and everything n dont think it means anything but us girls were delicate lol
i really liked this poem but it could have been more engaging half way through i started 2 get a bit bored with it but dont get me wrong that was an awesome poem

4/5

"I love you so deep inside,
I need you by my side.
I love you so deep inside,
I want to be your guide."

its such a great lines,..5/5

Awwwww. i know my words of praise not enough for this poem.. becoz its so well written a complete meaninf, feeling desired love.

i like your thinking and the choice of words is perfect.

When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.

the very first stanza was my favourite stanza... you put great image here.

alothought i felt a bid sad in toher stanzas.
maybe this poem realy relates to me. 5/5

This poem sounds so sincere, like it's written straight from the heart and I could really feel what you described in every stanza. Beautiful piece, filled with captivating simplicity and the feelings that everyone can relate to.

Honestly this poem almost had me in tears. I loved the reason behind it. I loved the thought with it.
Great Write
Emma 5/5

This is a common poem.. i mean the msg is too common... i think it'd be better if you showed ur emotions by describing them with different words that can really define what u truly feel... but it's good tho.. i wanted this to be great! =]