Comments : Ode To Our Love

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    I like this poem, well writen. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    "Love blossoms within our garden,
    The sun shines so strong,
    This love is never ending.
    A heart now less barren,
    I know this cannot be wrong,
    This is only our beginning."

    I love that part, especially the last line,
    it's my absolute favorite.
    It's so true, and lovely to hear from you.

    This entire poem is gorgeous, Ben.
    You're so amazing, you know.
    Such a gift you have with words.
    =)

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    This is wawwwwwwww
    i love it mostly and nicely flow 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem really lifted my mood. The flow was very nice and the concept was beautiful. You've done a great job of word usage as well :) Good write.