OMG !!! This definitely will go to my fave poems..
Breaking up with romantic partner will always never seems to go well...And through this poem you have portrayed the level of your sadness, pain associated with the endin, and even guilt and self blame..
They say preventin yourself to grieve or cry will only prolong the pains..And i admire that line "you cryin in the rainin"..Give yourself and herself time to heal..
I know how much it hurts to see that person whom we are willing to die for leavin us coz of the unbearable pain that we had caused them...
This is really beautiful, it means a lot. i love how it reminds me of.."i like the rain because no one sees my tears". it is a great poem, easy flow and everything. good job babe! and as i know you will, keep up the good writes!
This is one of most touching poems I've ever read!! The feelings of sadness and regret jumped right out and hit me square in the heart!! You truly amaze me with your writing at times hun, this is surely one of your best ever!! 5/5