Comments : Jump

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Its good xxx

  • I wasn't there to experience specifically this event but i've been in a similar situation. Great choice of diction. this poem has so much imagery that being thre is not necessary, you took care of giving the reader an inside look of how you felt in that moment.

    Good work- ADA**

  • 15 years ago

    by jane

    Very nice....keep it up.....5/5 = )