My love, My best friend

by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop   Mar 21, 2008


How can I describe,
All of these emotions,
And put into words,
The size of my devotion,

I don't think it is possible,
But at least I shall try,
You are my one and only,
In whom I will confide,

You bring a smile to my face,
Every time I hear your voice,
You make my heart begin to race,
Even if it's not my choice.

I love you more than life,
You are special beyond compare,
I will never bring you strife,
Throughout this life that we share,

I will treat you like a queen,
I will give you love with ease,
This world may be diseased,
But you are my vaccine,

You have given me so much,
I can't describe it here,
I hunger for your touch,
I want you with me here.

With you I'll spend forever,
Until my dying days,
We will conquer life's endeavors,
Together in many ways.

When I kneel at night and pray,
May this love never end,
The main thought that I convey,
You are my love, my best friend.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chicken Soup

    Man ull surely get what u want in this piece of writing its like the Ring to a wedding

  • 16 years ago

    by ROSE

    It was a nice & sweet poems..

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem touched me from beginning to end. The flow here, although broken in some parts, was amazing. The choosing of words expressed such deep emotions... The rhymes were off in some places, like: here and here. Don't use the same words for rhyming. That's all I think, well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    How can I describe,
    All of these emotions,
    And put into words,
    The size of my devotion,

    I don't think it is possible,
    But at least I shall try,
    You are my one and only,
    In whom I will confide,

    ^^ Two stanzas I appreciated the most. With love in our lives, we are empowered beyond belief.. Love is the very essence and core of our being…Everyone in life has a deep-rooted desire to love and be loved. A cute and very romantic piece coming from a guy. Excellent piece. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    It`s totally you with some flowing mistakes, lol.

    "You have given me so much,
    I can't describe it here,
    I hunger for your touch,
    I want you with me here."
    ^^ It fit fine, but it just didn't sound right for some reason, it kind of took the. . . charm away. I think more because "hunger" isn't so, yeah. That you know? Lol, it still is fine there, it just through me off.

    Other than that an amazing poem
    You did a wonderful job with it, and I'm glad to see you're more Daniel-ish by the day. (:
    Lol.

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