It's always the quiet 1s who have the most 2 say. this poem is very sad but very true. ppl just don't notice the signs on a person until it's 2 late. it's a hard and scary world and ur poem just really stated it perfectly, it brings so much emotions 2 the reader, very powerful. 5/5!
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~me~

This was such a good poem. I could feel everything that u were saying and I thought that was really good. Idk if u meant 4 her 2 really be mute but how I got was that she was just some1 that ppl never heard. That she was some1 that no1 ever listened 2 and that's y she turned 2 the razor. Now I don't know if that's how u wrote it but that's how I got it. Ethier way, 5/5