I really liked this poem it was great. The wording was wonderful and the flow was nice. hmm, the only this you might want to change is the first line of the first stanza. it is worded kinda weird it might throw some readers off. 5/5

I like this poem as I think it simplifies that Love takes more work to keep. I like the line ( We rehearse a tragic symphony of love,
As children offer up balloons to God.) as if to say you are surrendering your love to a higher being that knows the pain of it.

keep writing great poetry x
5/5