Hanging on to nothing

by X Harlea X   Mar 22, 2008


I am hanging on to nothing,
as i try to live through each day.

i am wising i had hope to hang on to,
that smeday you will foregive me.

now i am letting go,
of what keeps me hole.

and looking for something,
to get me through each day.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Adam RIP Lesthat and Cody Hayden

    Very good harlea.
    ;) lesthat

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Well done i liek it x

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Sorry, but I didn't like this piece much. I'm a rhyming poet fan, and that's probably why I didn't like it, plus, it was a bit messy and confused, you say you're hanging on to nothing, but then you say you're hanging on to hope. If this piece was really stong, I don't think it would matter that it doesn't rhyme, but because its not very powerful, it just doesn't do much. Sorry.

    Brad

    P.S. Thanks for your comment on my piece 'When' and I hope you voted.

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