Happiness and suffering,.

by khate   Mar 23, 2008


Love is a hidden fire,..
....when you love someone,
....you keep hiding it,
....and when its gone,
....you now have a broken heart,
....and it'll hurt you so badly,.

Love is a pleasant sore,..
....dont lose hope,
....for you to be not sad,..

Love is a soothing pain,..
....its comporting
....but sometimes,
....it gives pain,..

Love is an agreable torment,.
....its so pleasing,
....but sometimes,
....it gives distress,..

and last

Love is a sweet wound in a short gentle death,.
....its nice,
....but full of suffering,
....sometimes,.^_^

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This to me is a masterpiece of truth

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    I like the meaning behind it but i dont like the way you have it set up.
    i give it a 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This is very well written, you have potential.

    I liked the set-up, its eye catching and the wording was very good.

    The flow wasnt perfect, but overall this was a very good piece of poetry, that i very much enjoyed.