Very deep. i love how you use words to express the true feelings. very well written. 5/5

Very good it had a brilliant flow to it
and a good story to go with the flow

keep writing
ill b reading :D

This's really nice.i enjoyed reading,good work

I really liked the soft approach in this piece the whole thing flowed very good and your message about missing some one you loved was very clear great job plot121

Wow this is hosnestly amazing

Very good write =)
What I really liked about this poem is the flow of it. Your rhyme scheme was great! Also the emotion behind it was wonderful.

"Follow the stars above
Where only a touch can feel
Into the unknown
Yet understand how real"
^^my fav part

Overall, perfectly written
5/5

Very sweet poem, I felt all happy and relaxed reading it, very easy to relate to... great job 5/5

Thanks all for the comment

It was soo heart felt...
the rhyming was really good...
but i think you can do better for the rhyming part...
umm... the way you described the love in the poem was really good!
keep up the good work...

i dont have any critiques

This cold makes me shiver
Where warmth in you I found.

i love the last two lines,.its wonderful

I LOVED THIS ONE
i liked this poem and this style suits you

5/5
great poem meaningful
:-)

This was a lovely poem, and beautifully written. I'm just not really a fan of love poems that are rather cliched, so I didn't absolutely enjoy the poem. However, it's still well-written.

I agree with all above, nice write. I enjoyed almost everyline. I can see your true emotion in the words. nice

Splendid work... dark blue ocean.. keep writing such poemz..... (Best wishez 007)

You wrote very sweet and cute poem i love it

Beautifully written my dear. I loved the imagery you painted with your soft words because they truly took me into another world which was wonderful. The words you used here were effective in getting your message across so well done *5/5*