God sent you to me.
^^ seems off with the other lines above^^
maby if you wrote it -- To me, God sent you--or maby you could just get rid of the TO ME part.

I search in the dark,
To find that key,
That triggers the spark,
You put in me... thats why?
^^ dont get the THATS WHY? part, i dont think it goes well there.

other than that i have nothing bad to say and i really enjoyed reading it.

Awww. nice poemmm. i loved ur this poem too

Excellent and the thats why part is fine becuz i get r rhyming scheme

just one thing
the part where u say
God sent you to me
you kood change tht to
God sent me you

but its ur writing so its ur choice

but very very well done

keep it up

I also agree that
"god sent you to me"
sounds a little off
I would advise simply changing it to god sent me you.
But other thatn that.
I really enjoyed the story behind the poem.
Good job

Nice poem..I did like it so much..keep it up 5/5..

Absolutely flawless, I loved it from beginning to end, you have a good great talent for writing, don't ever stop! :)

Thanks for the all comments

Awesome,nice poem,.i really love reading it,

Good poem. Your writing is very well.

You put such a good imagery there. Keep writing, Noha!

^^5/5^^

You deserved it!

Thanks alot

Its a great poem but try making the 2nd and 4th line rhyme instead of the 1st and 3rd
it would make it better
another 4/5

tears

This made me say "Aww" out loud. Haha. It was a very sweet poem. It sounded a little off here and there, but overall, a good try.

I liked your write but would have dropped the "that's why" I dont think it fits and without it it seems to end that verse just fine.
You put in me... thats why? keep up the nice writes

Hmm...This poem was okay, I really didn't like it very much though, even though it was pretty cute and sweet, it didn't have much of a flow at all, the poem started non-rhyming, then was rhyming, then was non-rhyming again. so 3/5 for me.
~gabriella

While I enjoyed all your writing. This poem just was a little not there for me. I still think your a wonderful writer.
Always
Emma 5/5

I have to admit, I didn't really like the fact that it rhymed in some stanzas, and not the others. But overall, I liked it.

"I search in the dark,
to find the key
That triggers the spark
You put in me"

^^ BEST stanza out of the whole thing.

Take care and keep writing.
~Lace

OMG this was awesome, breathtaking and BEAutiful!

It seems like it should be framed and on valentines cards.!.! (the good ones....)

It really true and great!
Good job
5/5