Silence of a broken heart

by cowgirlstar26   Mar 24, 2008


Memories flow steady
nothing stops the pain
turmoil stabbing my heart
this is what I had to gain?

i'll clench my fists
watching my life hit the floor
I hate this, I hated you-
falling at heavens door

God, if your out there,
hold me in your hands
cause if you can't save me
i'll fade into another land

a gut wrenching thought
this rain keeps fallin down
this will never cease ?
help me! I can't hear sounds

this is my life?
played in a minor key
each measure too delicate
ill brake, ill bleed

can I say I hate you
used and left in the dark
this, is for all those nights
this silence of a broken heart

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  • Excellent job. I like how your writing flows so well and its very meaningful

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I must say this poem is even more amazing now, wow!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    First of all, the way you wrote this poem is very, very hard to read, it would be much easier if you wrote it in stanzas, or if at least you did not make a lot of free space between every line.
    But (except that it was hard to read this) I enjoyed so much in each line! You expressed so strong emotions and truly painted a vivid pictures in my mind, totally original work. Well done, few lines are simply fascinating and all in all excellently written.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    "this is my life
    played in a minor key
    each measure too delicate
    ill brake, ill bleed"
    ^^^
    Amazing, so powerful stanza.

    Whole poem is greatly written, filled with fantastically expressed emotions. I've always liked your poetry very much- your descriptions are absolutely flawless, very beautiful. This piece is also very touching, heartfelt from the first to the last line.
    Greatly done.
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by khate

    Awesome,..love it ^_^,5/5