This is really good!

Hey Dennis this poem is one of the sweetest...I love it! The words are amazing and the way you expressed how you feel is wonderful....
keep it up 5/5

OMG!! I love this one honey!! The imagery and word choice is amazing, I felt as if I were a cork rolling along with the waves. I honestly believe you write more creatively when you don't try to rhyme, and just let the words flow from your fingertips. Now I have a question. Whose eyes? :D
Love Erika
5/5

Wow Dennis! This is both sad and romantic. The imagery created is stunning. Beautiful work as always! 5/5

Omg, this is like...AMAZING...

too much for words to be honest, it just pulls you in, I felt like I was really into this..

good job, keep it up :)

Hauntingly beautiful and romantic. I love the choice of words and the visions they created.
5/5

Wow this is beautiful! Took me on a journey to a far off place and back again, and left me wishing it didn't end so soon!

Oh this is amazing hun! This is why I need you to help me with my writing, I'll never come close to anything like this on my own lol. Truly beautiful! 5/5

This is very beautiful, and though short it speaks volumes in so few words. Don't drown in there my friend, and enjoy the trip =]

THIS IS A GOOD POEM DENNIS... REALLY WISH SOME ONE SHOULD WRITE THIS ABOUT ME..... 5/5

Wow i love this

Great job, it was beautiful! 5/5

It's Beautiful!! <3

A thought provoking piece. Nicely done.