Comments : Lost love and gained a tressure

  • Absolutely wonderful poem, great rhyme scheme and wording. I like this one the most...

    She look up and through her cry
    She doesn't notice this other guy
    Perfect in all his power
    Granting her a single flower

    for obvious reasons *points to the catta lilly flower* tee hee

    Great job, BRAVO! :) 5/5