I dont like the reapeatedness of it otherwise a good poem
4/5

tears

The repetition in this poem is very effective in driving the point home
Many are hurt worse than they should be and would be if they knew how much they could be. I have no problem relating to this poem at all right now. This poem is a keeeper

It was kinda rep. but I liked it otherwise :)

I didn't like how the majority of the first lines in the first stanza ended in "could". It just got too repetitive and therefore a little bit boring. However, I do like the emotion expressed in this.

This was a very good write. The voice was wonderful and the emotion was 100% real. The only thing that I really couldnt get a hold on is the flow. The first stanza threw me off a little because of the usage of the word "could" in each line. Other than that, it was perfect =)
Overall 5/5

There are way too many woulds and coulds. It's overpowering to the poem. The flow was pretty messy. But the idea was clear. I think if you were to do this differently same idea though it would be a better poem. 3/5

Beautiful writing love it! the flow was disturbed in some parts but i gave it a 5/5 it was well penned with emotion felt over the computer screen lol it was good. beautifully penned

The repeation was a little much although it wasn't too bad, the flow was preety good, the word choice is simple yet effective, and the emtion was really really deep, and raw. I write honest comments, and I hope that i don't offend you, The only way that I could see to improve on this peice is to cut out some of the repeation, and cut down on the use of the words you and hurt. try findind words that mean the same thing at rhymezone.com Another tip is to read your poem out loud a few day after not looking at it, otherwise you did a great job 4/5

The idea was clear && you gave great explanation. i really liked it.
you kept the reader interested.
maybe you repeated a little too much.. but who are we to judge!?
this is how you feel, and we cant judge that. i liked it because you showed emotion.
nice <3
5/5

Thanks for all comments

A few of the lines are jumbled. you hsould have just made them another line instead of just writing continously on one of them. and one mistake. line 16? "to word you" should be "toward you" good writing.

Wow if person really did hurt you this bad and you still want to love him than keep all the good memorys of him. nice poem =)

Ya its nice too u r da best

I like it..your pain could be felt with ur words...pray for the best..hope one day he will return...take care

YOU DO HAVE GOOD EMOTION IN THIS POEM THE FLOW WAS A LITTLE OFF BUT BUT BESIDES THAT ITS A GOOD POEM...4/5

Am sorry for you Noha, i hope everything going to be alright soon.

i can understand your feelings inside this poem, even myself i never imagined that love can hurt change me like it did

Though this is a very sad topic to write about, I just didn't feel it. Maybe it was the fact that you kept repeating all the "coulds". After a while, it got TOO repetitve.
All in all, not bad, but not my favorite.

Take care,
~Lace

Great job. Maybe you could adjust the lines, where they begin and end. I'm not sure if it's just the site that changed the format though.
I love this line,

"I had to open up my eyes to things that i never thought that i could."

(In my opinion, it may sound even better if you take out the second "that" in the line.)

I love this poem, Its going in my favorites its a beautiful poem, and it like describes the way I feel...Great Job :]

It's a sad poem of love, I also felt that before..
great poem!