This poem is soo beautiful and the flow really helps it out and makes it more easier to read because the way you wrote it allows it to just keep going and flow really smoothly..
Each and every stanza is so powerful and emotional.. you really captured so many emotions and times where we would feel sad or low ..
I tried to choose my favorite stanza but I just loved all of them so much.. they were all beautifully written.. but these are a few of my favorites lines..
When all you can think of
Is why do they pry
When words seem to fail you
It's ok to sigh
Sometimes we can't say anything or do anything but all that is left to do is sigh..
You did a great job in this poem.. it is really inspirational too because you really show that everyone goes thru these things and that it IS OK to feel this way and it is ok to cry.. it is a really reassuring poem..
sometimes all we need is someone to tell us that it is ok.. and this poem is the perfect way to tell someone just that.
I'm sorry about your friend. I'm sure this poem helped her out a lot. Great job. =)
How many times have you said that to me? "It's OK to cry Jackie, things will be all right".
Knowing you're there to wipe away the tears makes it so much easier, and your hugs do seem to make everything feel all right again. I don't know what else to say right now except THANK YOU!
OMG sweetheart, you know this is exactly what attracted me to you in the first place! You've got a giant-sized heart and always put everyone else ahead of yourself. This is so beautifully written, simple yet deep at the same time. I know how lucky she is to have you for a friend, because I'm thankful every day for having you in my life! Love Erika
Wow this is a beautiful poem!!....you expressed this wonderfully....i love the message behind it exspecially since i find it brave when people let their emotions out and cry...in my opinion its not weakness they show but strength to let it out...well i loved the way your words just flow throughout the whole poem....your obviously very talented...you did a great job...definetly a 5/5:)
p.s- thank you for your kind comment on my poem:)
Wow this is a beautifully written. This is the best poem i've read all night....i loved the message you were getting across ..so many people see crying as a sign of weakness and i think its amazing that you wrote on this subject..very creative<3....i see why your friend turned to you in times of need...
your an amazing writer...i look foward to reading more<3